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[exo] kryos (3/3)

Tags: !fanfic, f: exo, l: threeshot, p: baekhyun/chanyeol, p: baekhyun/tao
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omg this was such a beautiful story.
i'm a major baektao shipper and i think it's just wonderful and so lucky for fans who have a writer who actually writes an amazing story for this rare ship.

i am crying so much towards the end and internally swearing because i didn't want to cry!!
at first i was like this is going to have a sad ending and tao is going to get his emotions erased again and then he didn't and i was like F*** yeah finally a story with angst with a happy ending!!!

and then the three years thing and i was like NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

But the ending isn't majorly sad like some stories and even though i wanted a more happy ending than that i loved the story so much.
Thank you for writing such an awesome story!!! you're a really good writer!
aslkdjlkf thank youuu T-T
yes this is ship is best ship and underrated!! although i think baektao is getting more exposure since idol gaylimpics woohoo
i-i'm sorry ;_____;
i really didn't mean to make it....this.........sad?????????????????
it just spiraled out of control and buh 8''''''''|a

and thank you for reading and commenting and being lovely! <3

thoughtsofgray

March 1 2013, 20:24:38 UTC 3 years ago Edited:  March 1 2013, 20:27:14 UTC

okay hi i read this a while ago ((idk like two weeks ago and i couldn't comment but i was shaking and i figured i should drop by and give you a comment because it's only fair. ok um just i'm sorry you're gonna have to read this. dON'T READ IT IT'S TOO LONG AND FEELINGS INDUCED))

OHMYGOD OH MY GOD? ? ? OHMY ACTUAL FUCKING GOD I'M GOING DIE I'M DYING OKAY I DIED YOU'RE SO FUCKING AMAZING I WANT TO HUG YOU AND KISS YOU AND WORSHIP YOU OR SOMETHING REALLY CREEPY LIKE THAT BECAUSE THIS WAS SO FUCKING AMAZING AND WONDERFUL AND PAINFUL AND WOW BYE IM DONE WITH THIS LIKE I LOVE YOU SO MUCH I KIND OF (NO I DO) HATE YOU I MEAN THIS IS SO BRILLIANT AND UGH BLOODY BRILLIANT I MEAN HOW WOW AND THE ENDING UGH THE BEGINNING THE MIDDLE ALL OF IT IS WOW AND .. . and.. just. . yeah. .. wow

i don't even know where to properly start with. the amazing brilliant plot or the characters or the wonderful writing or the painful tugs of my heart just everything is so overwhelming but i'm not going to let that stop me from giving you a comment you deserve beCAUSE YOU EVEN DID A FUCKING RESEARCH FOR THIS I MEAN YOU DEFINITELY DESERVE A FEW WORDS OF ADMIRATION. first off, you're brilliant (i'm repeating myself wow but seriously) and you know, this fic is basically everything i didn't know i wanted in my life. i'm a huge fan of sci-fi and you definitely did it justice with all the brainy details and the scientific terms mAN YOU DESERVE ALL THE AWARDS. the whole concept was amazing and the future world you built took my breath away literally ((ok no i wasn't chocking no worries)). the angst, the romance and the pain was perfect and beautiful and do i need to start on the baekyeol? ? ? dO I ? ? ? BECAUSE OHMYGOD THEIR RELATIONSHIP WAS ALL KINDS OF SWEET AND TRAGIC AND WOW I WANNA CRY. i loved loved loved chanyeol's character. you made him feel so real and alive and his emotions were basically reaching me through the text because that's how deep you made him. in all honestly, i loved everything about chanyeol. how he cared so much for baekhyun, the fact that he continued to stick by his side despite everything is admiring and idk i liked his well rounded character. ((i'm not gonna even say anything about baekhyun because i loved every piece of him)) aND LUHAN AND ZITAO LIKE? ? ?? ((did i mention how talented and amazing you are?? ? ? I'M GONNA CONTINUE TO SUCK UP TO YOU BECAUSE I LOVED THIS I WAS READING IT PASSIONATELY OKAY))

oh jesus the development of zitao's and baekhyun's relationship was really nice to read. i loved how despite zitao not capable of feeling much at the start, they still somehow fell together naturally. it was heart warming to say the least. and i just... yeah... i don't even know what to say anymore. this is definitely one of my top favorite fics because uGH and your writing is so nice and smooth and nice and hOW DID YOU EVEN CHURN THIS OUT OHMYGOD

i loved the ending despite baehyun's implied death. like it left me feeling satisfied and it was really nice.... i love you

ohhh and i HAVE to quote something god damn it because this was amazing beyond my limited vocabulary like ugh this paragraph made me wanna curl up and cry beCAUSE F E E L I N G S

A human’s life on earth is so fleeting, so fickle and insanely short. They light up the earth like fireworks in a summer night, some bright and glaring, some small like roman candle, each lasting only a few seconds in the gaping mouth of the heavens. All beautiful in their own ways, bringing happiness to the world with their unique colors. No one can make a firework stay up in the sky forever, because eventually the sun will rise, and a new day will begin. It’s how it has always been, how it should always stay.


AND THIS OHMYGOD

His gut feeling tells him that tomorrow he won’t see Baekhyun again, that this is the last time he’ll see him like this. Maybe tomorrow he’ll just be ash in an urn on one of Zitao’s shelves.

GOOD FUCKING BYE YOU'RE AMAZING I HATE YOU EVERYTHING HURTS BUT AT THE SAME TIME IT'S NICE AND WOW BYE
whoops only remembered to reply sorry ;;

how.........do you write a sentence that long without periods/commas in capslock lmfao
but thank you!!! ;________;

omg i love sci-fi too!!!! the world needs more sci-fi fics tbh 8(((
chanyeol/luhan are my favorite character in this tbh \o/
i had so much fun writing those two!!!

aaahh i'm glad that the development of baektao was okay!
i personally think it's was too sudden but lol w/e \o/
HOW DID I CHURN THIS OUT????????? I DON'Y KNOW TO BE VERY HONEST???? WRITING SATAN TOOK OVER MY MIND I GUESS???

lmfao ye i didn't want to explicitly describe his death a second time so i thought this was more appropriate kekekeke
wah omg XDDD

thank you for reading and commenting and being lovely! <3
wow! this is really perfect! i feel bad for chanyeol in this though. baekhyun really brushed him to the side, and his lack of presence in the story reflected that. i love the futuristic dystopia you developed! very interesting! :)
Fucking hell I've got tears here, just just- I haven't cried or almost cried at a fic for a while now (not since I read turns on a dime I don't think) but this was so beautiful, seriously the moral or message from this, I'm not sure whether I have it as you intended, about just letting the one ultimate truth about our world just run it's course like it should- like nature has intended. That we shouldn't be so afraid of death, loosing your entire being may be a scary thought while you're alive but it is so wrong to cheat it. Having an eternal life would probably be the single most depressing thing in the entire planet, just how lonely and empty would you be all the time...? I find it really really amazing and god damnit you're such an amazing author for coming up with this sort of thing, even if it's not what you intended the message being it still made me think about it anyway.
And wow -even though I don't believe in it whatsoever personally- I really hope Chanyeol, Tao and Baekhyun get to meet in that 'Eden's garden' afterlife.
All of the science-y stuff you pulled out here seemed very well researched, so well done for that! It's nice to read somewhat realistic stuff and it shows your efforts put into this fic.
So I guess I'll just say thank you so much for writing this and I really hope you'll write more in the future- you're very talented!
/gross sobbing/
/throws self at your feet/
this was just so beautiful
it took a long time for me to give in to reading this...i was so afraid of the plot, cheating death...but wow, this is great. how did i not read this a long time ago hahaha
Like I'm slightly hurt cause it seems he had loved tao better and all he feels for chanyeol is remorse but looking at it, it seems likes chanyeol loved baekhyun too much and from that love, Baekhyun knew how to give love to tao...am I making sense? no?haha
It's like passing the great love he felt, he knew.

Anywaaaay, I just can't stop myself from commenting hahaha so yeah...cause my baekyeol heart is a bit hurt but elated at the same time hahaha


This was beautifully written and tore my heart to smithereens in all the right ways. One of my favourite baekyeol fics (and baektao, actually!), for sure ;_;
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*cries* this is so beatiful and painful at the same time! Love it ^.^
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